Sensory Language

Sensory language is the use of details from the five senses to add color and depth to writing. It helps readers visualize the scene a writer is setting.

Sight

Example 1

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

[Mrs. Flowers'] skin was a rich black that would have peeled like a plum if snagged, but then no one would have thought of getting close enough to Mrs. Flowers to ruffle her dress, let alone snag her skin.

Example 2

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

I looked around the room that I had never in my wildest fantasies imagined I would see. Browned photographs leered or threatened from the walls and the white, freshly done curtains pushed against themselves and against the wind.

Example 3

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

They were flat round wafers, slightly browned on the edges and butter-yellow in the center

Sound

Example 1

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

“It was the best of times and the worst of times . . .” [Mrs. Flowers'] voice slid in and curved down through and over the words. She was nearly singing. I wanted to look at the pages. Were they the same that I had read? Or were there notes, music, lined on the pages, as in a hymn book? Her sounds began cascading gently. I knew from listening to a thousand preachers that she was nearing the end of her reading, and I hadn’t really heard, heard to understand, a single word.

Smell

Example 1

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

The odors in the house surprised me. Somehow I had never connected Mrs. Flowers with food or eating or any other common experience of common people. [...] The sweet scent of vanilla had met us as she opened the door.

Taste

Example 1

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

The sweet vanilla flavor was still on my tongue and [Mrs. Flowers'] reading was a wonder in my ears. I had to speak.

Touch

Example 1

From Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings:

I jammed one whole cake in my mouth and the rough crumbs scratched the insides of my jaws, and if I hadn’t had to swallow, it would have been a dream come true.

This page was last modified on September 10, 2009.

24 Responses to “Sensory Language”

  1. ulises says:

    Can you recommend another website to get more examples?ulises

  2. wendy says:

    Great examples! Helped alot!!

  3. ..I.. says:

    you all suck

    • Mr. Scott says:

      Thank you for the well-thought-out, constructive feedback on the site. I especially appreciate the care you took to be grammatically correct and write in a proper, formal voice. In an age of short, grammatically atrocious, vitriolic nonsense that the anonymity of the Internet inspires, it’s good to see someone take the time to craft a thought-provoking analysis of what we’re doing here.

  4. languageclass says:

    this really helped me with my language work and my grade 5 class did a project on the subjet , so, this really helped and thanks a ton :)

  5. An eight grader says:

    Thanks I am a eight grader this helped me a lot

  6. yake says:

    i got an assignment and this help tanks.XD

  7. Mr. Scott says:

    Anti aircraft artillery!

  8. fer says:

    helped me very much:)

  9. jojo says:

    This sucks!! Make it to where a 5th grader can understand!! #this#sucks

    • Mr. Scott says:

      I appreciate the constructive criticism. The irony of your complaint says more than the complaint itself.

  10. isabel says:

    Thank u a ton????

  11. MEEEE says:

    Do you know what part of speech it is?!?

  12. Mr. Scott says:

    What?

  13. RM says:

    These comments are absolute gold on your part, Mr. Scott! Seriously though, thank you for taking the time to help us all out here! Great examples! :)

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