Revision and Preparation

First, fourth, and sixth periods worked on revising some of their diary entries for: clarity of content; descriptive details; and sentence variety. Students looked at each other’s work to find elements that could be improved, then worked in pairs to improve...

Poetry Project and Revision

Since I’ve come to the conclusion that I’m not stressing writing enough, I’m in the process of re-planning some lessons. As such, first, fourth, and sixth periods worked revision strategies today, using the history of Anne Frank as a thematic base....

Linguistic Change and Drafting

First period worked on revising their initial memoir drafts. We looked for content holes and/or loaded content–places where the writer didn’t give as much detail as he/she could. Second period discussed the use of a socially offensive word in To Kill a...

Editing and Reviewing

First, fourth, and sixth periods ended units on an excerpt from Maya Angelou’s I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings. We’ll be having a very short selection test tomorrow. Second period worked on editing their second drafts. We spent a little time concentrating...