Holocaust and Written Style

Fourth period worked on three elements of an author’s (and individual selection’s) style: diction tone, and mood. We looked at an example selection to see how the author manipulated words and phrases to create a specific mood and tone. First, second, and...

Final Draft and Intro to Style

First and seventh periods had a final day of work on the memoir final draft. It is due tomorrow, along with several other documents: First draft Peer editing form Second draft Final draft Rubric Fourth period worked on the nonfiction form and will continue tomorrow....

The Lead; Presentations; Diction

First period worked on leads. We looked at six examples: The Dramatic Lead: I wouldn’t make it through the night without it. Starting In the Middle Of a Scene: I was sure we’d find the blanket ripped and dirty. Leisurely Lead: When I looked into my Grandma’s linen...

Selection test and diction

Second period worked on improving their diction in their memoirs, specifically focusing on creating more specific nouns and verbs. I spoke individually with several students about their drafts and ways to improve it. The class is slowly coming to realize that writing...