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Arguments, Rebuttals, and Jaggers

First and fifth periods worked on choice debates. We’ll be having the debates later in the week; today we worked on the first scenario, fleshing out one side of the argument and beginning to work on the second side.

The scenario we used is from Bargaining Games, by J. Keith Murnighan:

You and an acquaintance, “Pat”, are walking down the street when you meet an older couple with a bag of money. The older couple makes the following offer: We wish to give the two of you $100,000 if you can decide how it should be divided between the two of you in the next 3 minutes. You say, “So, Pat, what do you say? How about fifty thousand dollars each”. To your dismay, Pat answers, “Gee, I’m really sorry, but my mother needs an expensive operation. So, I’ll take eighty thousand dollars and you can have twenty thousand. I won’t settle for anything less!”

Pro: Argue that Pat should agree to the 50/50 split.
Con: Argue that Pat’s financial needs are great, so you should agree to the 80/20 split.

We’ll be dividing into groups for individual scenarios for debate tomorrow.

Second and fourth periods began by examining a sentence from chapter eighteen of Great Expectations

I had known him the moment I saw him looking over the settle, and now that I stood confronting him with his hand upon my shoulder, I checked off again in detail, his large head, his dark complexion, his deep-set eyes, his bushy black eyebrows, his large watch-chain, his strong black dots of beard and whisker, and even the smell of scented soap on his great hand.

Afterward, we looked at the character Jaggers in some detail.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: complete the three arguments and their rebuttals for the 80/20 split (the con argument above).
  • Second and fourth periods: work on the Lord of the Flies project.

Foreshadowing and Schaffer Practice

First and fifth periods had a  practice run of the extended starters (ten minute writing sessions followed by five minute mini-discussions in pairs) we’ll be doing as part of this final unit.

Second and fourth periods began looking at the question of foreshadowing in Great Expectations.

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Homework
  • First and fifth periods: none.
  • Second and fourth periods: read chapters 16-20 of Great Expectations. Use the skimming technique we practiced in class yesterday.

Skimming and Planning Choices

First and fifth periods began learning the format of the journal entries we will be working on this final quarter (though they didn’t know that at the moment). We worked on using rationales to explain our choices.

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First and fifth period notes

Second and fourth periods went over how to skim a text effectively. I showed them how

  • to apply previous knowledge;
  • to look for subjects and verbs, disregarding phrases; and
  • to know when to stop skimming and start reading.
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Second and fourth period notes

Students then worked on skimming the following passages.

THE felicitous idea occurred to me a morning or two later when I woke, that the best step I could take towards making myself uncommon was to get out of Biddy everything she knew. In pursuance of this luminous conception I mentioned to Biddy when I went to Mr Wopale’s great-aunt’s at night, that I had a particular reason for wishing to get on in life, and that I should feel very much obliged to her if she would impart all her learning to me. Biddy, who was the most obliging of girls, immediately said she would, and indeed began to carry out her promise within five minutes.

The Educational scheme or Course established by Mr Wopsle’s great-aunt may be resolved into the following synopsis. The pupils ate apples and put straws down one another’s backs, until Mr Wopsle’s great-aunt collected her energies, and made an in- discriminate totter at them with a birch-rod. After receiving the charge with every mark of derision, the pupils formed in line and buzzingly passed a ragged book from hand to hand. The book had an alphabet in it, some figures and tables, and a little spelling– that is to say, it had had once. As soon as this volume began to circulate, Mr Wopale’s great-aunt fell into a state of coma; arising either from sleep or a rheumatic paroxysm. The pupils then entered among themselves upon a competitive examination on the subject of Boots, with the view of ascertaining who could tread the hardest upon whose toes. This mental exercise lasted until Biddy made a rush at them and distributed three defuced Bibles (shaped as if they had been unskilfully cut off the chump-end of some- thing), more illegibly printed at the best than any curiosities of literature I have since met with, speckled all over with ironmould, and having various specimens of the insect world smashed between their leaves. This part of the Course was usually lightened by several single combats between Biddy and refractory students. When the fights were over, Biddy gave out the number of a page, and then we all read aloud what we could — or what we couldn’t — in a frightful chorus; Biddy leading with a high shrill monotonous voice, and none of us having the least notion of, or reverence for, what we were reading about. When this horrible din had lasted a certain time, it mechanically awoke Mr Wopsle’s great-aunt, who staggered at a boy fortuitously, and pulled his ears. This was understood to terminate the Course for the evening, and we emerged into the air with shrieks of intellectual victory. It is fair to remark that there was no prohibition against any pupil’s entertainting himself with a slate or even with the ink (when there was any), but that it was not easy to pursue that branch of study in the winter season, on account of the little general shop in which the classes were holden — and which was also Mr Wopale’s great-aunt’s sitting-room and bed-chamber — being but faintly illuminated through the agency of one low-spirited dip-candle and no snuffers.

It appeared to me that it would take time, to become uncommon under these circumstances: nevertheless, I resolved to try it, and that very evening Biddy entered on our special agreement, by im- parting some information from her little catalogue of Prices, under the head of moist sugar, and lending me, to copy at home, a large old English D which she had imitated from the heading of some newspaper, and which I supposed, until she told me what it was, to be a design for a buckle.

Of course there was a public-house in the village, and of course Joe liked sometimes to smoke his pipe there. I had received strict orders from my sister to call for him at the Three Jolly Bargemen, that evening, on my way from school, and bring him home at my peril. To the Three Jolly Bargemen, therefore, I directed my steps.

There was a bar at the Jolly Bargemen, with some alarmingly long chalk scores in it on the wall at the side of the door, which seemed to me to be never paid off. They had been there ever since I could remember, and had grown more than I had. But there was a quantity of chalk about our country, and perhaps the people neglected no opportunity of turning it to account.

By the time we debriefed as a class, the period was over.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: use the “Rationale” section of today’s second graphic organizer and select the two best rationales of the three. Using those as your concrete details, write a Schaffer paragraph about your rationales for your choice.
  • Second and fourth periods: using the skimming/scanning technique we worked on in class today, read chapters 11-15 of Great Expectations.

PASS Prep and Presentation Preparation

First and fifth periods worked on PASS preparation in anticipation of next week’s writing exam. Second and fourth periods worked on their presentations on To Kill a Mockingbird, which they will make next week.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: none.
  • Second and fourth periods:
    • Romeo and Juliet soundtrack project due Monday;
    • second prompt for To Kill a Mockingbird due next Thursday.

Research Question Headings and Killing Mockingbirds

First and fifth periods continued with the research process, spending the first half of the class working on additional research questions — you can never have too many — and the second half dealing with the organization of the questions into categories.

Second and fourth periods continued with To Kill a Mockingbird, discussing Atticus’s stricture that it is “a sin to kill a mockingbird.”

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: none.
  • Second and fourth periods: read chapters 12-14.

Finishing Algernon, Starting Mockingbird

First and fifth periods finished up some work for “Flowers for Algernon” after going over yesterday’s MAP results. We wrote about and discussed the following:

  1. How do feel about your score?
  2. Is it higher or lower than you were expecting?
  3. Why exactly were you expecting higher or lower?
  4. Look back over this school year and list three choices you’ve made that contributed to your score.
  5. List two things you can do for the remainder of the year to make sure you begin to fix some of the problems listed above.

Second and fourth periods began To Kill a Mockingbird. We read about and discussed Jim Crow laws in order to provide adequate background knowledge before beginning the novel.

Second and fourth period notes

Second and fourth period notes

We then turned our attention parsing one of the tricky sentences in the first couple of pages, using arrows to indicate relationships (antecedents, adjectivals, etc.) for better comprehension.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods:
    • complete the essay on empathy (if you haven’t already);
    • annotate the essay by:
      • putting a circled number one at the beginning of concrete details;
      • underlining direct quotes and labeling them with a circled number two;
      • circling your citations and labeling them number three;
      • labeling your sentences that include an introductory phrase with a number four;
    • read to the end of “Flowers of Algernon” (from approximately page 333);
    • complete the questions on page 342
  • Second and fourth periods:
    • prepare for final Romeo and Juliet quiz tomorrow (you can take the practice quiz here);
    • analyze the following sentence from To Kill a Mockingbird in the same way we parsed the sentence today (see above):

      In England, Simon was irritated by the persecution of those who called themselves Methodists at the hands of their more liberal brethren, and as Simon called himself a Methodist, he worked his way across the Atlantic to Philadelphia, thence to Jamaica, thence to Mobile, and up to Saint Stephens.

Pair Work To the Fourth Power

All four classes work working in partners; all four classes were in some stage of planning or writing major analytic essays.

First and fifth periods finished up the planning stage of their empathy essays. Those essays are due Wednesday.

Second and fourth periods spent the day planning their Romeo and Juliet extended essays.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: complete first draft of essay by Wednesday.
  • Second and fourth periods: final draft due in two weeks (18 March).

Introductions and Conclusions

First and fourth periods worked on their Algernon project. We focused on the introductory paragraph after spending some time continuing from yesterday planning the body paragraphs.

Notes on how to create an introductory paragraph (first and fifth periods)

Notes on how to create an introductory paragraph (first and fifth periods)

Second and fifth periods completed the Baz Luhrmann version of Romeo and Juliet, with the somewhat-controversial final penultimate scene.

Romeo approaches the seemingly dead Juliet

Romeo approaches the seemingly dead Juliet

Homework
  • First period: complete the introduction and body paragraphs by Monday for five points extra credit on the essay.
  • Second and fourth periods: print out the lyrics for your two songs and bring them Monday.
  • Fifth period:
    • complete the introduction paragraph;
    • complete the body paragraphs by Monday for five points extra credit on the essay

Balcony Revisions and Pulling Strands Together

First and fifth periods worked to pull together a number of strands together: citations, direct quotes, the Schaffer model, and sentences using introductory phrases. We’re using our two-part definition of empathy from yesterday (empathy means a. sharing the same emotion as someone and b. taking action as a result)  to organize a short piece about Charlie (from “Flowers for Algernon”) being empathetic. We worked on planning today with a graphic organizer to that end. The mini-project, which foreshadows our larger research project which we’ll begin Monday, will be due Monday and will be evaluated on these criteria:

  1. The finished product will have three paragraphs: a short introductory paragraphs and two Schaffer body paragraphs, each with two concrete details. (30 points)
  2. Each concrete detail will include a direct quote from the May 20 progress report. (20 points)
  3. Each direct quote will include a proper citation. (20 points)
  4. Each paragraph will have one sentence that properly uses an introductory phrase that requires a comma.

Second and fourth periods continued watching Romeo + Juliet, the 1997 re-visioning of the play. We completed act two today and should finish the whole play tomorrow.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: continue planning the empathy piece as needed.
  • Second and fourth periods: work on the Romeo and Juliet soundtrack project.

Quoting Sources and Further Planning

First and fifth periods worked on citations and quoting sources. The major focus for this quarter is research skills, and that includes what to do with the fruits of research. We focused today on how to incorporate quotes into our writing in order to strengthen our writing and avoid plagiarism. We looked at three points to effective quote use.

  1. Include who the author of the source is.
  2. Use only the most important part of the sentence you’re quoting.
  3. Try to blend it in with your own words; don’t just write, “Smith says, ””

Initial efforts were promising:

Second and fourth periods worked on the first paragraph (which will be upwards of a page long in and of itself) for the Romeo and Juliet project. We ended by looking at how to craft more descriptive and predictive topic sentences. The class’ results are below:

  • Second period: “Decoration Day,” with its feuding clans and reluctant violence, parallels the behavior and causes of Romeo’s fight with Tybalt.
  • Fourth period:“Decoration Day,” which tells the story of feuding clans and a narrator reluctant to involve himself in the fight, parallels Romeo and Juliet‘s central themes.
Homework

Final Lab Work and 2.2

First and fifth periods completed the research project for the Diary of Anne Frank unit. Second and fourth periods went through the prologue and first scene of act two.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: if you have not turned in your project at courses.ourenglishclass.net, you have until midnight tonight to do so.
  • Second and fourth periods: none.

Exam and Research

First and fifth periods continued with the research and writing project for Holocaust heroes. We’ll finish up tomorrow.

Second and fourth periods had the midterm today. We had to put of the Romeo and Juliet quiz until tomorrow. Additionally, students can download sonnet results here. (You’ll need your identification number to determine your grade. I hope you still have it.)

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: do research and writing for project as necessary.
  • Second and fourth periods: study for act one quiz on Romeo and Juliet tomorrow.

Anne Frank Viewing and Sonnets

First and fifth periods finished and abbreviated viewing of The Diary of Anne Frank. Probably not the most uplifting way to finish out the week before a long break, but hopefully students return home thankful for their freedom and admiring those who fought to keep their own.

Second and fourth periods had a second and final day of working on their sonnets. When we return from break, we’ll be doing the heavy lifting, so to speak: we’ll be starting Romeo and Juliet.

Homework

Please be aware, second and fourth period students, that in the sonnet template above, there is one element missing: scansion. Remember that the second version of your sonnet needs to have scansion added, as in the example below.

Shakespearean sonnet with scansion

Shakespearean sonnet with scansion

Sonnets and Anne

First and fifth periods watched some of a television version of The Diary of Anne Frank. Second and fourth periods continued working on their sonnets.

Homework

Heroes and Sonnets

First and fifth periods took a practice test to acclimate them to the Moodle testing system. Afterward, they returned to the topic of heroes and heroism, looking at two contemporary issues to see if the actors are heroes or not.

Second and fourth periods began working on their sonnets.

Additionally, we altered the poetry anthology project so that students only have to read and write about eight poems.

Homework
  • First and fifth periods: none.
  • Second and fourth periods: continue working with the anthology project.